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damn... 5 hours of pixeling... and it still looks terrible.



What's wrong with his eyes?! What's wrong with his teeth/mouth (still in progress)?

I'm working on the nose, so never mind that. And the pixel outlines are wrong but I just wanted to colour something, so I'm fixing the parts I am colouring. But the eeeeyes?

those took me hours and they still look so wrong... :iconuhuhuhuplz:

Any ideas on how I can improve that?
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=teralilac Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think the eyes look fine and pretteh :hug:
but I think maybe add a darker outline for the upper lip??
I think you've done a good job here, pixel takes so long and I get the same feeling when I work on a pixel for too long, I tend to think it looks awful and want to give up :P
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~nonecansee Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist
Hmm. I don't know if anyone else has commented on this but his left eye looks too triangular (and also, by illusion, smaller than the right eye, but it's supposed to be bigger since his left side is directed at the viewer) and the pupil a mite too square, I mean the straight line is throwing me off.

I hope I helped :O_o:
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=ms-laika Dec 20, 2012   Traditional Artist
thank you - I will try to fix that ;___;
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~nonecansee Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist
Good luck :) Concentrate really hard and when blood forms on your forehead, you know you've got it, haha.
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*kristinaelyse Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I hit the muro button on accident, oops!
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*kristinaelyse Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it looks great so far...but since everyone's commenting on the teeth, I guess...maybe shorten the length of the teeth a notch, and open his mouth just a tiny bit (barely part his lips) so the darkness from the inside of his mouth can contrast against the white teeth? If that makes any sense.
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=ms-laika Dec 20, 2012   Traditional Artist
Yes, the part with the contrast is definitely a good idea. ^^
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:iconpoochu:
Maybe its because one eye is much bigger than the other but thats right. The eyes look really nice to me.

I see where you're going with the fangs so if you havent erased the top teeth already you can just finish from where youre at and if they still dont look right you can just erase them.
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=ms-laika Dec 19, 2012   Traditional Artist
Lots of people told me I should erase them. At first I wanted him with an open mouth but that just didn't look right. Hmm yes, I will try to shade them more and then, if they still look terrible I will erase them.
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No harm in trying to anyway! Good luck! I know how frustrating it gets trying to pixel!(not happy with my own icon!)
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